Frage von thehills, 29

Ist die Grammatik auf Englisch richtig (kleiner Text)?

ist das richtig ihr dürft es gern umschreiben und mir tipps und hilfe geben :)

Hey Kersti I just wanted to book my flight to stockholm and every flight is not fitting in. because I'll land at 9 a.m thats way to early! because the check in is at 4 p.m I'll be 7 hours to early the next day my flight would go at 8 p.m thats allright because the check out is at 12a.m and I have to go to the Model agency and I'll do some seightseings so the hours will go fast but the arrvivel day is way to early I was looking every flight is at the morning :(

I found a really good flight to stockholm I'd be there at 20p.m december 2nd and go at 18 p.m december 4th thats the perfect flight I would come wednyesday evening and could to the next day all my photos and appointmens so I can leave december 4th right after the check out and go to the airport

Expertenantwort
von AstridDerPu, Community-Experte für Englisch, 20

Hey Kersti

I just wanted to book my flight to stockholm  (RS) and every flight is not fitting in (Ausdruck) (keine Satzzeichen) because I'll land at 9 a.m (Punkt) thats (RS) way to (RS) early!

because (Wort; am Satzanfang groß) the check in is at 4 p.m (Komma) I'll be 7 hours to (RS) early (Punkt) 

(Hier fehlt eine Präposition) the next day (Komma) my flight would go at 8 p.m (Punkt) thats (RS) allright (RS) because the check out is at 12 a.m (Punkt) and I have to go to the Model (RS) agency and I'll do some seightseings (RS) 

(Neuer Satz)  so the hours will go fast (Komma) but the arrvivel (RS) day is way to (RS) early (Der Ankunftstag kann nicht zu früh sein) I was looking (Hier fehlt eine Präposition)  every flight is at (Präposition) the morning :(

I found a really good flight to stockholm (RS) (neuer Satz oder Anbindung) I'd be there at 20 p.m (Punkt) (Hier fehlt eine Präposition) december (RS) 2nd and go at 18 p.m (Punkt) (Hier fehlt eine Präposition) december (RS) 4th (Neuer Satz) thats (RS) the perfect flight (Neuer Satz oder Anbindung) I would come (Hier fehlt eine Präposition) wednyesday (RS) evening and could to (RS) the next day all my photos and appointmens (Satzstellung) so (Hier fehlt ein Wort.) I can leave (Hier fehlt eine Präposition) december (RS) 4th right after the check out and go to the airport (Punkt)

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Außerdem solltest du dringend noch einmal die verwendeten Zeiten überprüfen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

AstridDerPu

Antwort
von DesbaTop, 29

Hey Kersti I just wanted to book my flight to stockholm but no flight is fitting in because I'll land at 9 a.m, thats way to early! The check in is at 4 p.m. I'll be 7 hours to early the next day. My flight would go at 8 p.m. Thats allright because the check out is at 12a.m and I have to go to the Model agency so I'll do some seightseings thereby the hours will pass by faster. But the arrvivel day is way to early. I was looking: every flight is at the morning :(

I found a really good flight to stockholm. I'd be there at 8 p.m december 2nd and go at 6 p.m december 4th, thats the perfect flight. I would come wednesday evening and could make all my photos and appointmens the next day so I can leave december 4th right after the check out and go to the airport.

Kommentar von thehills ,

dankeeee du held :)))

Kommentar von DesbaTop ,

Nix zu danken :)

Kommentar von lola188 ,

*too early

Kommentar von DesbaTop ,

Stimmt :) Übersehen^^

Antwort
von Lilly0987, 23

Hey Kersti I just wanted to book my flight to stockholm and every flight is not fitting in. Because I'll land at 9 a.m thats way too early! because the check in is at 4 p.m I'll be 7 hours too early the next day and my flight would go at 8 p.m. Thats okay because the check out is at 12a.m and I have to go to the model agency and I want to do some sightseeings, so the hours will move fast, but the arrivel day is way too early. I looked, but every flight is in the morning :(

I found a really good flight to Stockholm. I would be there at 20p.m on december the 2nd and go at 18 p.m  on december 4th. thats the perfect flight. I would come wednesday in the evening and could to the next day all my photos and appointmens so I can leave december 4th right after the check out and go to the airport

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