Frage von Kratzeis15, 33

Ist die Bewerbung in Englisch gut geworden?

                                                                                                    12 Blueball Court                   
                                                                                                    Old Hall Green
                                                                                                    Hertfordshire SG11 1DS

The Secondary School High St Hertford SG19 5SY

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing with references to your advertisement in today's newspaper Gazette for a job as a teacher on your school. I would like to apply for the job. I enclose my CV.

I am 15 years old and I'm in the eight class of the IGS secondary school. My speacial subjects are Maths, English and german. I did work experience in several schools as a german and english teacher , what I very enjoyed. It makes me happy to teaching childrens in different subjects. I would be grateful if you send me further information to your job.

I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely

Leon kiter

Antwort
von Ewwas17, 12

I am 15 years old and in the eigthTH class...

English and German werden immer groß geschrieben.

I gained work experience in several schools teaching German and English, which I enjoyed very much.

It makes me happy to teach childrens... oder It makes me happy teaching

...further information on your job.

Antwort
von rotreginak02, 8

als 15-Jährige(r) kannst du keine Erfahrungen als Lehrer an verschiedenen Schulen haben, also geht es bei deiner Frage nun um Hausaufgaben....

Die mache bitte selber.

Antwort
von MTbear, 6



The Secondary School High St Hertford SG19 5SY

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with references to your advertisement in today's newspaper Gazette for a job as a teacher at your school. I would like to apply for the job. I enclose my CV.

I am 15 years old and I'm in the eighth grade of the IGS Secondary School. My special subjects are Math, English and German. I have work experience in several schools as a German and English teacher, which I very much enjoyed. It makes me happy to teach children in different subjects. I would be grateful if you send me further information about your job opening.

I look forward to hear from you soon.

Sincerely

Leon Kiter



:P Sehr glaubhaft *lol
Besonders die Erfahrung als Englischlehrer



Expertenantwort
von earnest, Community-Experte für Englisch & Grammatik, 1

Nein. 

Auch wenn du die Frage immer und immer wieder stellst, ImCrazzer.

Antwort
von AlinaLoorie, 15

I very enjoyed it*

to teach*

I would be greatful*

Das mit dem CV kommt nach unten, unter die Überschrift

Nene noch fähigkeiten, die man für diesen Beruf braucht und begründe, warum du eben diese Aufweist. Gehe noch mehr darauf ein warum du das machen möchtest. Sag auch, warum gerade diese Schule 

Und schreibe auf keinen fall: if you send me further information about your job

Das kommt unvorbereitet und uninformiert rüber.

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