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After a long, often tiring flight you arrive on the other side of the globe: in Perth. The capital of West-Australia is surrounded by ocean and desert. Your flight usually arrives late at night or in the early morning. That's why we take care of the transfer to an atmospheric hotel in the center of the city. Go to bed early, so you will enjoy the next day in Perth optimally and also can be the same used to the Australian time. Perth can be discovered on foot. Although it is a vibrant city, it also has the typical Australian 'laid-back' character. There is plenty to see and experience: Walk in Kings Park with panoramic views of the city for a walk, visit the university town of Fremantle and the related weekend markets or try in Perth's own brewery, a Little Creatures. If you have a little more time, we encourage you to spend an extra night in Perth. Especially visiting Rottnest Iceland worthwhile. The island 'Rotto' as the locals call it, has secluded beaches and coves where you can swim wonderfully and snorkelling. We made it fun to drive with rental bikes across the island. On the way you see determines Quokkas (Kurzschwanz kangaroos) that there is almost only on this island.
Nambung National Park - Cervantes Pinnacles - Western Australia As from another planet
Driving time about 4 hours
Today you begin your journey on the west coast so right. In the morning you take your car hire in Perth and leave the city soon behind. Go all in peace, because on the highway you cover the distance of 300 kilometers back quickly. The highlight of the day is the Nambung National Park, which is known for the famous Pinnacles. Feels as you would on a different planet ... If you look across the vast lunar landscape, you will see thousands over the golden desert plain scattered limestone pillars and the sea in the distance. The route forms a loop and you can get anywhere, to admire the landscape. After visiting the famous desert there are still about 17 km to the place Cervantes, where you spend the night. This small, relaxed town thrives on the crayfish industry. It is not hard to get here a good dinner
Dolphins feed in Monkey Mia The famous dolphins of Monkey Mia
Journey time: about 6.5 hours
You will continue your journey and leave Kalbarri to continue to drive in the Australian north. If you have arrived on the peninsula, head towards Shark Bay, which is on the list UNESCO World Heritage site for nothing. The next 2 nights are spent in order to be fed in a comfortable Resort in Monkey Mia, where wild dolphins come to shore. Although it is over the years has become a tourist attraction, but it is a unique experience to see these intelligent animals at close range. Tip: Wait for the feeding around noon, then is going on much less. Today and tomorrow, you can explore the peninsula on your own or relax on the beach of Monkey Mia. Visit Hamelin Pool (with a unique stromatolites colony and living fossils) and the unreal Shell Beach (th
Irgendwie werde ich den Verdacht nicht los, dass dieser Text weitgehend aus einem Blog oder einem Tourismus-Prospekt abgekupfert wurde(Wörter wie "vibrant", "atmospheric" . Fehler aber sind trotzdem darin:
Ein paar Korrekturen bzw. Bemerkungen (Auswahl):
"and also can be the same used" ergibt keinen Sinn.
Im Satz mit "Especially" fehlt das verb, z.B. "is"
"drive with rental bikes across...": Falsche Wortstellung. Falsche Präposition: "with" geht nicht.
where you can swim and snorkel wonderfully
"Go all in peace" klingt für mich falsch.
Nambung National Park vermutlich ohne "the" davor.
to teh palce Cervantes vermutlich ohne "palce", also to Cervantes.
"then is going on much less" ist definitiv kein Englisch, sondern DeutschlichKwänglisch.
Wer ist eigentich "we" in dem Text? Siehe mein oben geäußerter Verdacht.
Tippfehler-Edit: to the place Cervantes: vermutlich ohne "place", also: to Cervantes.
Wörter wie "vibrant"... weisen darauf hin. (Hier fehlten 3 Wörter)
Im großen und ganzen, ja.
Warum sollte dir jemand diesen abgekupferten Text korrigieren?
Die "unique stromatolites colony" zum Beispiel ist zwar über Jahrmillionen, aber sicher nicht auf deinem "Mist" gewachsen ...