Frage von taby6, 10

Ist der englische Text richtig geschrieben?

The first people who immigrated to the continent , the indigenous people were also called Aborigines. Due to the isolated location of Australia some peculiar archetypes of fauna have been preserved. In Australia as many rare animals come before that one wonders how naturally this can be seen in many places and observed . The Australian continent has its own , distinctive vegetation, " Flora australis " with around 20,000 different plant species . More than 90 percent of the proven here plant species exclusively in Australia .

Cultural trip: 2125,-€ 2 Persons In this tour of Australia impressive regions are combined. You start your trip in Sydney. Then you will fly inland to Alice Springs. In comfortable tent or under the open sky you can experience the immense expanse of red desert and learn more about Aboriginal culture. Fly to Darwin, or traveling with the famous "Ghan". From Darwin to explore the expansive wetlands of the North with abundant wildlife and ancient Aboriginal rock art. After all, you be amazed at the colorful underwater world of the Great Barrier Reef.

Mixed Trip: 1560,-€ 2 persons You drive with a comfortable rental car from sunny Perth over dry desert areas , expansive white sandy beaches of sparkling turquoise sea , ground out canyons , refreshing oases and green forests to the tropical town of Broome . Visit on the way the bizarrely shaped rocks " Pinnacles " . Keep in Monkey Mia out for wild dolphins and take in Kalbarri , as well as in the Karijini National Park long walks . Another highlight is the unique underwater world of Ningaloo Marine Park .

You can book every trip with All inclusive or with half - board .

You can rent a car or go with a group of fellow travelers in a coach .

You can book a translator too.

You can also be picked up by a bus from the airport .

Expertenantwort
von AstridDerPu, Community-Experte für Englisch, 5

The first people who immigrated to the continent, the indigenous people (Komma) were also called Aborigines. Due to the isolated location of Australia (Komma) some peculiar archetypes of fauna have been preserved. In Australia (Komma)

as many (Ausdruck) rare animals come before (Ausdruck) that one wonders how naturally this (Grammar) can be seen in many places and observed (Sinn).

The Australian continent has its own, distinctive vegetation, " Flora australis " with around 20,000 different plant species . More than 90 percent of the proven here plant species exclusively in Australia. (kein vollständiger Satz)

Cultural trip:

2125(Punkt)- € 2 Persons (Grammar) In this tour of Australia (Komma) impressive regions are combined. You start your trip in Sydney. Then you will fly inland (Ausdruck) to Alice Springs. In comfortable tent (Grammar) or under the open sky (Komma) you can experience the immense expanse of red desert and learn more about Aboriginal culture. Fly to Darwin, or traveling (AE; BE = travelling) with the famous "Ghan". (kein vollständiger Satz) From Darwin to explore the expansive wetlands of the North with abundant wildlife and ancient Aboriginal rock art. (kein vollständiger Satz) After all (Ausdruck), you (Hier fehlt ein Hilfsverb.) be amazed at the colorful underwater world of the Great Barrier Reef.

Mixed Trip: 1560,-€ (s.o.) 2 persons (s.o.) You drive (Wort) with a comfortable rental car from sunny Perth over (Präposition) dry desert areas, expansive white sandy beaches of sparkling turquoise sea, ground out canyons, refreshing oases and green forests to the tropical town of Broome. Visit on the way the bizarrely shaped rocks " Pinnacles " (Satzstellung). Keep in Monkey Mia out (Ausdruck) for wild dolphins and take in Kalbarri, as well as in the Karijini National Park long walks (Sinn). Another highlight is the unique underwater world of Ningaloo Marine Park.

You can book every trip with All (RS) inclusive or with half - board (Formulierung).

You can rent a car or go with a group of fellow travelers (AE; BE = travellers) in (Präposition) a coach .

You can book a translator (Wort) too.

You can also be picked up by (---) bus from (Präposition) the airport.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu

Expertenantwort
von earnest, Community-Experte für Englisch, 6

Auch dieser Text ist mit ziemlicher Sicherheit wieder abgekupfert - oder schreibst du "Down Under" professionelle Werbebroschüren? 

Warum sollten wir dir diesen abgekupferten Text korrigieren?


Antwort
von xDerPcProx, 10

hab kein fehler gefunden :)

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