Ich schreibe morgen eine Englischarbeit und wollte fragen ob der text, der unten steht richtig ist?
My hero is Cristiano Ronaldo.
He was born on February 5, 1985 Funchal. At the moment he lives and plays in Madrid.
Cristiano Ronaldo is my hero because he never lets his team down. In 2005 and 2006 he led his team to the finals, then helped them win it all. Cristiano Ronaldo is my hero because he inspired to play soccer. He has made me a great soccer player because I watch how he does moves on TV.
He wears number seven when he plays for Portugal and number nine when he plays for Real Madrid. In 2008 he finished thrid for player of the year.
I think Cristiano Ronaldo is the greatest player in the world.