Hilfe, wie gut ist meine Bewerbung auf Englisch?
I feel I am suitable for the position for several reasons. I have five years' experience as a Personal Assistant and I deal with clients from around the world in various languages daily. During the absence of my boss, I had the possibiliy to manage his position for three months and I was able to organise and prepare documents, preparation of meeting and board papers. Since we had different departments, I had the opportunity to organize several and big events. I am very flexible and work fast and reliably and thats's why I am able to work on tight deadlines and I respond immediately to urgent requests. You can be also sure that I am able to make bookings for travel arrangements. Because I know a lot of travel agencies, I get special offers. In further, for many years I had the opportunity to attend a course to get an excellent written communication skills. I have worked on various confidential work in Switzerland and abroad. I speak and write English perfectly as well as German and French fluently. In addition to these skills, I also have exceptional performance in Word, Excel and SAP, which I use on a daily basis in my work. Thanks to these experiences, I was able to learn to take initiative. In our company, there were many challenges and I learned to deal with them.
Hört sich für mich sehr gut an.
Über zwei Stellen bin ich "gestolpert":
"I know a lot of travel agencies" [warum nicht einfach "many"?]
"I have worked on various confidential work in Switzerland"
[Da erschließt sich mir der Sinn nicht. " worked on... work" ?]
Kann aber sein, dass da einfach mein Englisch nicht reicht.
I had the possibility; that's why I am able
Das kann niemand beurteilen, der nicht zumindest auch weiß, auf was für eine Stelle Du Dich bewirbst.