Frage von Flame1, 59

Hilfe! Sind diese englischen Sätze korrekt?

Bitte helft mir, da ich mich in Englisch nicht so gut auskenne, wie ich es gerne wöllte. Ich habe die Stellen fett angestrichen, bei denen ich mir ziemlich sind, dass sie Fehler beinhalten, aber ihr könnt auch gerne den Rest der Sätze korrigieren (In Grammatik, Satzbau, etc.) . : /

1.The lighthouse was first in the 6th century a worldwonder because it wasn´t in the original list.

  1. He has travelled along trade channels and report from the seven impressivest buildings.

  2. ... city wall from/ of (?) Babylon.

  3. lighthouse of/ from (?) Alexandria

  4. The lighthouse was built on the island Pharos which have one km distant to the mainland.

  5. The bay was used to do business before the lighthouse was built.

  6. Homer has written in his Odysee...

  7. At begin of the 3th century the new governor Ptolemaios 1. oder Sostratos to built a lighthouse.

  8. First a joining dam from mainland to pharos was construed which becomes the island of the lighthouse.

  9. Over it begins a 30m high constructional with a diameter from 11 m.

  10. Then you could see...

  11. Just the same height as this level is the following beacon.

  12. If you would walk at the second platform you have to went through the inside of the tower.

  13. All of the statue had instruments which was to catch the wind.

  14. On the perpetuation was written:...

  15. All this information we had get from Hermann Thiersch.

  16. It´s still a matter of debate whether the lighthouse was used just at night or also by day.

  17. Some people say this is possible becaus on the desert- like mediterranean coast aren´t any landmarked to orient.

  18. Across diffrent mirrors the sunlight was reflectived to the horizon and you could see this light in still 50km distant.

  19. By a earthquake the lighthouse was corrupted but 1480 Sultan structured a fort ... and used as building material the collapsed ruins.

  20. The lighthouse has probably the same colour like the building which was named ...

  21. There are still some whispers.

  22. The people from this city could watched humans...

  23. There are artifacts upon the lighthouse.

  24. The lighthouse was also called by the island.

  25. On Latin lighthouse is meaned..., in Italy you said ... and in Portugese it´s...

  26. So this worldwonder is us in the new Built from Sutan and in some speeches stayed.

Vielen Dank erstmal für das durchlesen der vielen Sätze, ich hoffe, ihr könnt mir helfen, also schonmal danke im Voraus, eure Flame

Antwort
von topas1712, 4

7. At the beginning of the 3rd century BC P. ordered S. to build....

Antwort
von TheMegaa, 10

Heyy,

hier mal meine Meinung zu den Sätzen. Ich hoffe sie sind richtig und du kannst damit etwas anfangen:

1.The lighthouse in the 6th century first was a worldwonder because it wasn´t in the original list.

2.... city wall of Babylon.

3.lighthouse of Alexandria

4.The lighthouse was built on an island called Pharos which has one kilometer distance to the mainland.

5.before the lighthouse was built the bay was used to do business.

6.Homer wrote in his Odysee...

7.At begin of the 3th century the new governor Ptolemaios I. ordered Sostratos to built a lighthouse.

8.?

9.In 30 meter height a construction with a diameter from 11 meters
begins.

10.Then you could/can see...

11.At the same level is a beacon.

12.If you want to walk on the second platform you have to go through the inside of the tower.

13.?

14.(the perpetuation was about: ....)

15.we got all this information from Hermann Thiersch.

16.It´s still a matter of debate whether the lighthouse was used only at night or also at day.

17.Some people say this is possible because at the mediterranean desert-like coast aren't any tags to orient.

18.Across different mirrors the sunlight was reflected to the horizon and you could see the light still in a 50 kilometer distance.

19.The lighthouse was corrupted by an earthquake but in 1480 the Sultan structured a fort ... and used the collapsed ruins as building material.

20.Probably the lighthouse had the same colour* like (...)

*colour = britisch; color = amerikanisch

21.There are still some whispers.

22.The people from this city had watched humans (doing smth.)

23.There are artifacts on the lighthouse.

24.The lighthouse was called like the island.

25.In Latin lighthouse is meaned..., in Italy you say ... and in Portugese it is...

26.So this worldwonder is staying in us and in the new building from the Sultan and in our speeches.

Falls du noch Fragen hast, kannst du mich gerne fragen :)

Mit freundlichen Grüßen,

TheMegaa

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