Frage von shkoevala, 13

Hausübung in Ordnung-Englisch?

In 2011 the Civil War began in Syria. This civil war has begun of President Baschar al-Assad. During this time, many people were killed, that's why they had to flee from their country. The vast majority of them reside now in camps in the neighboring countries. Already alone, Turkey has received 2 million refugees. They are fleeing from distress, anxiety and political persecution. Not only People in Syria but also other people are fleeing. For millions of people are seen around the world forced to leave their homes. I think all county in the world should take refugees, then the whole would not be so complicated. On the way to Europe so many refugees die. Because of this it is advised to open the borders.

DANKE

Expertenantwort
von AstridDerPu, Community-Experte für Englisch, 13

In 2011 (Komma) the Civil War began in Syria. This civil war has begun (Zeit) of (Präposition) President Baschar al-Assad. During this time (Ausdruck), many people were killed, that's why they had to flee from their country. The vast majority of them reside now (Zeit) in camps in (---) neighboring (= AE; BE = neighbouring) countries.

Already alone (Ausdruck), Turkey has received (Wort) 2 million refugees. They are fleeing from (Präposition) distress, anxiety and political persecution. Not only People (RS) in Syria but also other people are fleeing. For millions of people are seen around the world forced to leave their homes. - (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.) I think all county (Grammatik, RS) in the world should take refugees, then the whole would not be so complicated (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.) On the (Possessivepronomen) way to Europe (---) many refugees die. Because of this (Komma) it is advised to open the borders.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu

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