Hallo, wer würde sich die mühe machen?
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You are a manager of a successful broadcasting company in your country. A popular newspaper has invited you to write an article with the title “Tips for young job seekers”. It is supposed to be published in the English supplement of its Sunday edition.
Write this article. Deal with the following items: - ability to work in teams - taking responsibility - knowledge and skills - Write around 250 words.
No pain, no gain. The job world is not that easy in our times. But the job is essential. Everyone must do something in live. Mostly, it costs us more that we think. However, there is light at the end of the tunnel: I offer you three tips, which will help you to climb up the job ladder. Firstly, I would like to say, that it is very important to work in teams. I think, that most of you can fit in a team and work without protest. Nevertheless, I really know that there are a few guys out there, who think, that working alone is better and more efficiency. I really must disagree. Work in groups is way better. The only issue you should solve is, how you divide the participation. Another aspect of being engaged most effectively, is that you should take responsibility. It is kind of a symbol for trust and professionality. Furthermore, never ever lie! It will break the relationship between you and your partners. Last but not least, it is very significant to improve your skills and expand your mind to gain more knowledge. It seems legit, but it is one of the biggest problems in the job. The stress, which includes the further education, is often followed by depressions. So, learn early and don’t suffer later on. In conclusion, you must study hard and be able to respond and work in a team. Participate and comply your part. Then, there will be a reward at the end.
Überarbeite das nochmal bitte.. Da sind so viele Sachen wie sie ein Engländer auf keinen Fall sagen würde. “There is light at the end of the tunnel.“ klingt sehr komisch
Du solltest dich nicht ganz so weit aus dem Fenster lehnen.
"There's light at the end of the tunnel" ist eine völlig normale Redewendung.
Dass du sie nicht kennst und komisch findest, ist nicht das Problem des Fragestellers.