Frage von 12345sommer, 30

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Wales is a small country over that we speak and I will tell some facts over Wales. The Sea is ever in the near. On the Wales Flag is a red dragon white a green and white background. In one thousand eight hundred and seventh was the red dragon the first time the Flag from Wales. Of this Country living Two million eight hundred thousand inhabitants. Meany from them live in fishing Village or big Towns like Welshpool, Newport or in the Capital Cardiff. Wales have one of the oldest language in Europa it’s a strange old Celtic. People fight for their language because it is an important part of their culture and tradition. But only 20% of the people speck Welsh so must learn children the language at school.

Und ja mir ist bewusst das da noch viel auszubessern ist aber ich kann halt echt keinen aus meiner Familie fragen.

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von Matahleo, 17

Hi, 

Wales is a small country (we speak about. I will tell you some facts about Wales. 
The Sea is always close by.
The Wales Flag shows a red dragon, white a green on a white background. In 1807 = eightteen hundred and seven, the red dragon was shown the first time on the Flag of Wales.
Two million eight hundred thousand people live in Wales. Many ofs them live in fishing Village or big Towns like Welshpool, Newport or in the Capital Cardiff. 

In Wales they speak one of the eldest languages in Europ. It’s a strange old Celtic. People fight for their language because it is an important part of their culture and tradition. Only 20% of the people speak Welsh so children shoul learn the language at school.

LG Mata

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Vielen Dank fürs Sternchen :)

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von Bswss, Community-Experte für Englisch, 8

Leider wimmelt es in Deinem Text so sehr von Fehlern, dass man hier gar nicht alle korrigieren kann.

Hier mal einige Korrekturen:

The country I am going to talk about is Wales, a small country located near the Irish Sea.  The Welsh flag shows a red dragon with...

In 1807 these symbols were used for the first time in a Welsh flag.

The population of Wales is 2.8 million.

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