Frage von selinaseli3322, 23

Habe ich Fehler bei im Text englisch?

Ich muss als Hausaufgabe eine zusammfassung von einen Text machen und ich wollte fragen ob es so richtig ist:

The story is about the girl Nina and it’s her birthday. Her brother David and some friends planned a trip to the Kakadu National Park as a birthday surprise. The group has an argument about what to do. Nina and Mike want to go swimming in a freshwater billabong, but David disagrees. He worries about salt water crocodiles which could be there. They arrive at the park and the rest of the day went normal. At the next day the group does some rock climbing, but while they do this, Mike and Nina disappeare. David and Cathy worry and David hurt his foot. After much waiting time they come back to the other both. When Nina is alone with David, she tells him that she and Mike were at a lower pool, but than a crocodile appeared at the other side. They ran and climbed a rock, so nothing fatal happened. Nevertheless it was a big shock.

Danke!

Antwort
von maddymalik, 7

This story is about a girl called nina and today is her birthday. Her brother
David and some friends planned a trip to the Kakadu National Park as a
birthday surprise. The group has an argument about what to do. Nina and
Mike want to go swimming in a freshwater billabong, but David disagrees.
He is worried about the salty water crocodiles, which could be there. They
arrive at the park and the rest of the day went quite normal. On the next day
the group does some rock climbing, but while they do this, Mike and Nina
disappear. David and Cathy worry and David hurt his foot. After long waiting, Mike & Nina come back to the small group. When Nina is alone with
David, she tells him that she and Mike were at a lower pool, but than a
crocodile appeared at the other side. They ran and climbed a rock, so
nothing bald could happened. Nevertheless it was a big shock.

so hört es sich etwas besser an. (:

Kommentar von ChickPea ,

salty water crocodile - ein salziges Wasser Krokodil?

Kommentar von maddymalik ,

oh, hab das "and about the.." vergessen, danke. (:

Antwort
von kikikiki13, 6

The rest of the day went on normal

glaub ich, aber ist sehr schön geschrieben👍

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