Frage von shkoevala, 21

Fehler im Text (Englisch-Hausübung)?

Hi guys

Today I want to speak about the subject “using mobile phones on public transport is impolite”. In my opinion, you should not be busy with the phone on public transport. Some people listen to music in the early morning and that annoys me. From time to time you could check the time, but that should not overdo it. Someday I saw a man who was busy with his mobile phone on public transport, but suddenly the thief came and took his phone away. Later, he went out and ran. So you should mind in the public transport. That was my blog entry.

See you, Jessica

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von ShmuelRotkraut, 21

You should not be using your phone. Check the time without overdoing it. Once, I saw a man...but suddenly a thief stole his phone. He then ran off with it. Take care on publoc transport. This concludes my blog entry.

Kommentar von ShmuelRotkraut ,

Ergänzung: Some people listen to music in the early morning, which I find rather annoying.

Expertenantwort
von AstridDerPu, Community-Experte für Englisch, 11

Hi guys

Today I want to (besser: would like to) speak about the subject “using mobile phones on public transport is impolite”. In my opinion, you should not be busy with the phone on public transport. Some people listen to music in the early morning and that annoys me. From time to time (Komma) you could check the time, but that should not overdo it (Ausdruck). Someday (Wort) (Komma) I saw a man who was busy with his mobile phone on public transport, but suddenly the (unbestimmter Artikel) thief came and took his phone away (Ausdruck). Later, he went out (Ausdruck) and ran (Hier fehlt etwas.). So you should mind (Ausdruck) in (---) public transport. That was my blog entry.

See you,

Jessica

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu

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von Herb3472, 20

suddenly a thief came....

Kommentar von Herb3472 ,

Later, he went out and ran away.

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