Frage von LisaM12, 60

Eurokom - Justin Bieber, geht das so?

Justin Bieber who was born on March 1, 1994 in London, Ontario and was raised in Stratford, Ontario, Canada is a Canadian pop-R&B singer. His full name is Justin Drew Bieber. He has a stepbrother named Jaxon and a stepsister named Jazmyn. Justin Bieber’s mother, Pattie Mallette was 17 years old when she became pregnant. He was raised by his single mother. Pattie Mallette worked a series of low-paying office jobs. Justin Bieber‘s Parent‘s separated when he was 10 months old. His father Jeremy Bieber married another woman and has two children.

He started singing since he was 12 and finished the second place when participating in a local singing competition and his mother posted a video of his performance on the website YouTube. Later she uploaded other videos in which Justin sang R&B songs.

As a child he learned to play the drums, the piano, the guitar and the trumpets by himself. Justin Bieber was interested in hockey, soccer and chess.

Justin’s videos soon built up a fan following and caught the attention of talent agent Scooter Braun. Usher was under contract by Scooter Braun. Usher was impressed and helepd Justin to sign a record. Justin’s first single „One Time“ was a worldwide hit.

Justin Bieber’s hits are:

  1. Where Are Ü Now
  2. All That Matters
  3. Baby
  4. Sorry
  5. Heartbreaker

Justin was with Selena Gomez from 2010 till 2013 in a relationship. Justin Bieber's grandfather was a German and emigrate to Canada, which is why Justin have a German surname.

In the wax figure cabinet Madame Tussauds in London, Amsterdam and New York city stand figures of Justin Bieber.

In 2011 Justin Bieber was in second place of the best-paid public figures less than 30 years.

Justin left his little monkey Mally at the Munich airport on his tour in March 2013 in Germany. Justin couldn’t show the necessary approvals and veterinary documents. At last Bieber worked diligently on a Bad-Boy-Image. Three times brought him his escapade in court In January, 2014 the singer pelted Calabasas the house of his neighbour with 24 eggs. He was condemned in July, 2014 because of vandalism to two years on proving, to the neighbour he had to pay 81,000 dollars of compensation. No two weeks after the egg incident Bieber was got in Miami Beach with an unlawful street running - without valid driving licence, but with alcohol and drugs in the blood. After an arrangement with the public prosecutor's office he confessed of the thoughtless driving guilty. Bieber had to pay 500 dollars of punishment And 50,000 dollars to a Charity organisation and visit an anti-aggression therapy. In August, 2014 it came to a collision between Bieber on a Quad and a car, then it should have come to a violent discussion between Bieber and one of the other guy. In summer, 2015 Justin Bieber had to justify himself before a Canadian court. Today we know the tattooed muscle-Bieber, but a long time was Justin Bieber the sweet little boy with der mushroom-hairstyl

Expertenantwort
von AstridDerPu, Community-Experte für Englisch, 34

Hallo,

warum sollen wir einen Text, der ganz offensichtlich zu einem großen Teil abgekupfert ist (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Justin_Bieber; http://www.justinbieberzone.com/justin-drew-bieber-biography-profiles-biodata-bi...) - und in den dann noch Fehler eingebaut wurden (z. B. im 1. Satz Ort vor Zeit) korrigieren?

Deine Lehrer / Prüfer sind nicht auf der Brennsuppn dahergeschwommen und auch im Internet unterwegs.

    Auszug aus Zentrale Maßstäbe für die Eurocom

    (kultusportal-bw.de/servlet/PB/show/1371097/eurokom2013a.pdf)

    Bei der Präsentation des Schwerpunktthemas sollen die Schülerinnen und Schüler

    zeigen, dass sie ein selbstständig vorbereitetes Thema strukturiert, verständlich und

    anschaulich darstellen und erläutern können. Das Thema wird von der
Schülerin / dem Schüler gewählt und mit der Fachlehrkraft abgestimmt. Es
soll den

    Anforderungen der Inhalte und Kompetenzen des Bildungsplans auf dem
Niveau der Klassenstufe 10 entsprechen.

    Die Präsentation erfolgt in zusammenhängender und freier Rede
(Stichworte als Gedankenstütze sind erlaubt). Im Anschluss an die
Präsentation sind kurze

    themenbezogene Rückfragen möglich.

    Bei offensichtlich auswendig gelernter Wiedergabe bzw. beim Ablesen
eines vorformulierten Textes kann die Präsentation unterbrochen werden.
Bei der

    Präsentation ist darauf zu achten, dass die verwendeten Medien
möglichst wenig Text enthalten.

AstridDerPu

Antwort
von hydrahydra, 28

Bieber, who was... Canada, is...

parents, nicht Parent's

his father, Jeremy Bieber,...

He started singing when...

... and made the second place in a local singing competition. His mother posted...

the trumpet (Singular)

Bieber is interested...

...and helped Justin get a record contract. (So wie du es schreibst, liest es sich, als hätte Usher beim Unterschreiben geholfen. Das kann Bieber aber doch sicher allein.)

.
... was in a relationship with S. G. from 2010 until 2013.

...was German [...] and emigrated to... Justin has a German surname.

Wax figures of J.B. can be seen in Madame Tussaud's wax figure cabinets in...

...best-paid public figures under 30.


So, den letzten Absatz machst du mal allein. Kleiner Tipp: Wortstellung und Kleinschreibung beachten!



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