Frage von ZnaLX, 24

Englisch Zusammenfassung, Verbesserungen?

Hallo zusammen, kann mir jemand sagen, ob ich diesen Text hier Grammatikalisch richtig zusammen gefasst habe?

Chapter 1: The first chapter of Robert Cormier's novel "After the first death" consists of a series of thoughts from a boy, called Ben Marchand. Ben is at boarding school, the same school his father once attended, anticipating the visit of his father and mother. Although his mother has visited him many times since September, this will be the first time Ben has seen his father since the bus hijacking. Ben grew up at Fort Delta, a military base where his father had served as a Brigadier General, in charge of a secret group referred to as Inner Delta.

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von Binchen98, 5

Chapter 1: The first chapter of Robert Cormier's novel "After the first
death" consists of a series of thoughts from a boy(,) called Ben Marchand.
Ben is at a boarding school, the same school his father once attended,
anticipating the visit of his father and mother. Although his mother had
been visiting
him many times since September, this will be the first time Ben sees his father since the bus hijacking. Ben grew up at Fort Delta,
a military base where his father served as a Brigadier General, in
charge of a secret group referred to as Inner Delta.

Ich bin mir nicht zu 100% sicher, aber das wäre, was ich ändern würde. Vielleicht hilft es dir ja!

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