Englisch Text. Mögliches Korrigieren und Ergänzungen zum Text?
Hallo Leute, ich soll im Englischunterricht einen Text über mein Praktikum schreiben. Ich selbst bin nicht wirklich zufrieden mit dem Text, muss den aber schon morgen abgeben. Vielleicht habt ihr ja Verbesserungsvorschläge und Inhaltsergänzungen für mich?
Der Text : I started last year my internship in the "Autohaus König". It´s a car dealership. There will be sales and repair cars. They offer the brands Renault and Dacia. The main reason why i choose that company is because I am very interested in processes of car sales and the background. My tasks were to price cars and create new car or customer files. What i really like in this Job is to meet interesting persons and to talk with them. But i didn´t like to work that many paper and files. That was very exhauting for me. It i had the chance the chance to choose a new internship I would decide for a big film production. I would like to see how are films making behind the scenes. For the future i dont have any special plans. At first I will finish the school, hopefully with a good school graduation. I can imagine that I´m doing an other internship after school. In the hope that i find the perfect Job for me
Danke im Voraus :)
Last year I started my internship at "Autohaus König". It's a car dealership. They sell and repair cars. They offer the brands Renault and Dacia. The main reason why I chose that company is because I am very interested in the process of car sales and its background.
My tasks were to price cars and create new customer files (...car or???). What I really like about this job is meeting interesting persons and talking with them.
However, I didn't like to work with that much paper and so many files. That was very exhausting for me.
If I had the chance to choose a new internship I would decide for a big film production company. I would like to see how are films are made behind the scenes.
I don't have any special plans for the future. At first I'm going to finish school, hopefully with a good school-leaving certificate.
I can imagine myself doing another internship after school. In the hope that I'll find the perfect profession for me.
Ich habe jetzt nicht sehr viel von den Wörtern geändert, aber es hört sich bezüglich des Ausdrucks teilweise schon sehr holprig an....
Habe aber am Grundsinn nicht viel verändert, weil ich oftmals nicht wusste, was du genau damit meinst. Und außerdem muss das in irgendeiner Art und Weise ja auch immer noch dein Text sein, weshalb ich hier jetzt nicht alles umgeschrieben habe. Potenzial wäre aber noch deutlich vorhanden!