Englisch Presentation über die Bücherdiebin stimmt die Grammatik?
Hello classmates today i will tell you more about the book the book thief. My class read this book in the german lessons. Well so lets start. the most inportan characters are Lisl she is the main character , Hans and Rosa Hubermann they are her foster parents , Rudi he is her best friend and Max , he is a jew who is escaping from the nazis. The interesting thing about this book is that the death tells us the story. The whole story of this book plays in the second world war. When Lisl is 9 years old she has already lost her father and her mom becouse they were communists. At the first pages of the book the death tells us that Lisl and her mother with her brother were in a train and there her brother died. After this they were at his burial. There Lisl stole her first book from a gravedigger. Then Lisl landed at her new home, the home of the hubermanns. At the beginning she was verry shy but it didnt take long that she liked them becouse Hans hubermann was very lovely. A short time later she met Rudi and they got best friends. In a night a jew called Max came to the little family becouse he was escaping from the nazis. Lisl liked max very much and they had a lot of fun together. I think that one of the best moments was when Hans hubermann Lisl and Max played with snow in the cellar. But that took problems with it because Max got ill. The family had to take max out of the cellar because it was to cold there and he got fever. After this they got a new problem where nazis were coming to the house of the hubermanns and wanted to check the bomb security of their cellar. The hubermanns decided to let the nazis check and hope that they did not find Max. Theyr cellar was not safe from bombs but the nazis did not find Max. Lisl did not only stole books a few times she alsow stole apples and potatos with Rudi. One night bomb planes flew over the village from Lisl. At this night there were no bomb signals. Lisl had luck because she was in the cellar and read a book. The hole village got bombed and a lot of people lost heyr lives. This is a real story. After the massaka Lisl went to Australia and there she got 90years old. Thank you for your attention i hope you found it interesting.
nein, der Text enthält viele Ausdrucks-, Satzstellungs-, Grammatik-, Rechtschreib- und Satzzeichenfehler.
Er ist mir aber nach einem langen Arbeitstag zu lang, um ihn zu korrigieren.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
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Auch in einem Referatstext sind Zeichensetzung und Rechtschreibung wichtig. Satzzeichen zeigen nämlich an, wo Sprechpausen gemacht werden müssen. Außerdem werden Wörter je nach Rechtschreibung unterschiedlich
ausgesprochen (z. B. live - life).