Frage von Freddie56, 26

Englisch - Sätze verbessern?

Sätze (Ausschnitte von Sätzen) haben keinen Zusammenhang, bitte macht mich auf Fehler aufmerksam bzw bin für Verbesserungsvorschläge dankbar

  1. ... when she finds out about her pregnancy.

  2. They would work through these feelings for the sake of my child and me.

  3. I might want to make new friends who have more in common with me and are able to give me helpful advices.

  4. I have to adhere to certain appointments.

  5. I suppose that my coping might resemble Alicia’s (coping? hört sich zwei mal hintereinander stilistisch nicht gut an, Vorschläge? ) in quite a few aspects.

  6. An abortion would cause lifelong regrets for me and I could not bear the thought of killing my own child

  7. I would also include my boyfriend in all decisions and would be grateful to get support from my parents, like (the support? selbiges Problem) Alicia receives from Robert and Andrea.

  8. Since I would have to face live changing decisions, I might get a more mature outlook on life

Antwort
von Steffile, 9

    ... when she finds out about her pregnancy.

    They would work through these feelings for the sake of my child and me.

    I might want to make new friends who have more in common with me and are able to give me helpful advices. advice ohne s

    I have to adhere to certain appointments.

    I suppose that my way of coping might resemble Alicia’s in quite a few aspects.

    An abortion would cause lifelong regrets for me and I could not bear the thought of killing my own child

    I would also include my boyfriend in all decisions and would be grateful to get support from my parents, same as Alicia receives backing from Robert and Andrea.

    Since I would have to face live changing decisions, I might get a more mature outlook on life

Expertenantwort
von AstridDerPu, Community-Experte für Englisch, 5

    Hallo,

    ohne Kontext und weitere Informationen ist es schwierig, richtig zu helfen.

    ... when she finds out about her pregnancy.


    They would work through these feelings for the sake of my child and me.


    I might want to make new friends who have more in common with me and are able to give me helpful advices (Grammatik; advice hat keinen Plural).


    I have to adhere to certain appointments.


    I suppose that my (Hier fehlt etwas.) coping might resemble Alicia’s in
    quite a few aspects.



    I would also include my boyfriend in all decisions and would be
    grateful to get support from my parents, like (Wendung) Alicia receives from Robert and Andrea.


    Since I would have to face live changing decisions (Wendung), I might get a more mature outlook on life (Punkt)

    Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.


    Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,


    für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

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    AstridDerPu


Expertenantwort
von earnest, Community-Experte für Englisch, 3

Eben - die Sätze haben keinen Zusammenhang. Daher ist unklar, wie die erwünschte Hilfe aussehen soll. 

Gruß, earnest

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