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I can’t believe it! Sam is ruining Alicia’s life! I knew it straight from the beginning that he has a bad influence on our daughter. Sam knows that he isn’t good enough for Alicia and that it’s just a matter of time when she breaks up with him - he is stupid and won’t be able to study at college, but Alicia will. This will be the end of their relationship. They will grow apart. He knows that. It’s clear that Sam has decided to get her pregnant, so she has to stay with him. What a selfish and foolish boy! He doesn’t even think about the consequences!
This will be the end of their relationship, they will grow apart and he is aware of this. It’s clear that Sam decided to get her pregnant to make her stay with him.
Sonst klingt das so abgehackt.
Ok. Mein Vorschlag anstatt "It's clear ..." "It's obvious ..."