Könnt ihr bitte meine Bewerbung korrigieren?
Hallo :) Ich muss für die Schule eine Bewerbung in Englisch schreiben. Könnt ihr meine bitte durchlesen und korrigieren? Application for an apprenticeship as a banker Dear Sir or Madam, With great interest I read your job posting on the website of the Federal Employment Agency. The described activity corresponds to my career aspirations. Therefore, I apply to you for an apprenticeship as a banker. I am currently attending the twelfth grade of a grammar school in the town of Coswig, which I will leave in July 2013 with the School Certificate. In my future career I would like to start an apprenticeship at the ***** because the profession of a banker promises a lot of variety, the personal contact with people and a wide range of challenges and opportunities. I would love to start an apprenticeship at the *****, because I am a customer for many years and would like to be a part of it. For me it would be interesting to see what the life of a banker is and to learn how to run the entire operations of a bank. I am empathically, reliable, helpful and I enjoy it to work with people - qualities that are very important for this profession. I would be happy if you invite me to a personal interview. Sincerely yours
Ist diese/r Comment/Argumentation gut? Englisch Hilfe!
We often people say that´s the world is running out of energy or that we are wasting to much energy but they are not really talking about energy but a source of energy such as oil or gas. In the following text I am going to write about Methods which convert the energy. One of the cheapest way to win Energy is possible by fossil fuels. For example by combustion of coal. The Method offers many jobs and it´s easy to transport. In my opinion we should still take the environmentally friendly Methods to win energy. One of the biggest problem is the pollution of the earth e.g. by the CO2 emissions. In addition the Methods are very dangerous and they destroy the landscapes. There can be caused a great disaster by a small mistake. For instance the disaster of Gulf of Mexico in 2010. An environmentally friendly Method is solar energy. On the one hand is solar energy very expensive and need much space. So that it efficiently there must be large areas of solar built. On the other hand the Method is renewable and free to use. The sun will always shine. Just like the solar energy is the wind power energy. They don´t product greenhouse gases. I think the important thing is that the method is not dangerous to us and the environment. To conclude I would like to say that the environmentally friendly Methods are the best way to win energy because our earth is enough dirty. We should thing more about the Future. Danke im Voraus.
Aufgabe in englisch fur das gedicht "Growing up?"
hey ich muss für englisch folgende aufgabe machen und kapier die voll net, weiß was die übersetzt heißt nur kann die nich auf das gedicht beziehen... Try to describe the parents behavior towards the speaker und dass ist das gedicht it must be,oooh, a month or more since they last complained about the way i eat or crisps i drop on the kitchen floor or not washing my feet or the TV left on when i go out or the spoon clunking against my teeth or how loudly i shout or my unmade bed, mud on the stair,soap left to drown or the state of my hair... it must be a month or more. have they given up in despair? for years they've nagged me to grow up, to act my age can it be that it's happened that i'm ready to step out of my cage. es wäre schön wenn ihr mir helfen könntet die aufgabe zu lösen oder ihr sie löst ;) danke für eure antworten im voraus und fürs durchlesen..
Kann man das so schreiben, Englisch comment?
Thirdly, I think it is important for young people to decide themselves how much time they spend with the internet. Teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions. Furthermore the teenagers will learn about responsibility. All in all, it cannot be dennied that the internet limitation for teenagers is unworkable and so it does not make sense. instead of using power to restrict something good they politican should discussed about how to help people who already adicted or have other problems with the internet.
Fragen zum Buch "never let me go"?
Kann mir vielleicht jemand bei den Fragen zum Buch weiterhelfen? How does Ruth persuade Kathy to join "secret guards"? -How does Ruth present information? -How might identifying the conspirators be useful to Ruth? Wäre lieb, wenn mir jemand helfen könnte :)
Könntest Du diesen kurzen englischen Text überlesen? :)
Für die Realschulprüfung sollen wir eine Reise planen, doch da ich besonders in Grammatik nicht so gut bin und meine Sätze auf eher unterem Niveau sind, könntest Du den Text kurz lesen? Und falls man manche Sätze besser, richtiger, oder "professioneller" formulieren könnte, es als Antwort schreiben !Danke! schonmal!!! :) My summer trip First we go by car to france, Avingnon than we'll be travelling by plane to spain more precisely to Malaga. To france: My parents, my siblings, my aunt, my uncle, my cousins, three friends of mine and me will drive to Avingnong. The petrol and the motorway toll will costs about 500 €. We start at the 30.05.12 very early in the morning and we`ll drive overnight, so that we arrive the Campingplace les trois rivieres at the 01.06 circa at 03:00 a clock in the afternoon. Five weeks we'll stay there, but after two and a half weeks my family drive back home and my friends and me will stay there another two and a half weeks alone. Just for me the residence cost for the whole five weeks 218,75 €. For the food and other stuff we've planned 380 €. When I was little I was at the same campingplace three times or thereabouts, so I know how it is there and I really think we'll mostly stay in or at the river, but if we don't, maybe we could visit the old town from Avingnong, visit markets and we could go shopping. To spain: We'll take a taxi from Avingnong to the airport in Toulon and go by plane to Malaga at 01:16 in the afternoon, the flight costs 749,47 € and arrive at 11:05 at night in spain. We'll stay three weeks in the hostel „Casa Babylon Backpackers“ for 315 € per person, Breakefest inclusive. For the food and other stuff I've planned 210 €. We want to visit the cathedral „Santa Iglesia Catedral Basílica de la Encarnación“, the fortress „Alcazaba“, the museums „Museo del Vidrio y Cristal de Malaga“ and „Museo Carmen Thyssen“, also we want to visit the botanical gardens „ Jardín Botánico-Histórico La Concepción“, thereon I'm especially look forward. The fly back to Germany starts at the 05.07.12 at 07:00 o'clock in the morning. During the journey are 6,45 hours stay in Barcelona, I think there is a little time, to have look at the city. At 6 a clock in the evening we arrive at the Hamburg airport. This flight costs 125 €. Altogether this trip will costs in the order 2498,22 €. And maybe I manage to convince my parents, that we really make this voyage this summer.
Englisch, Portfolio bitte mal rüberschauen :)
Hey Leute, morgen muss ich mein portfolio in englisch abgeben und ich wäre sehr dankbar, wenn hier einer typische Fehler aufzeigen kann, ehe ich es abgebe. Die beiden Texte, die ich bisher habe: K. In my opinion, Carol acts like a frightened, anxious hypocrite. She has always been used to being unpopular, invisible – a nobody. Whilst her oh so sad life, the color game arrives at the right moment. Being a Dark Green – an upper class – gives her the needed self-confidence. So the power she can exert over the lower classes is certainly very valuable to her and encourages her to follow the rules of the color game. However, this leads her to betraying Amy in order to keep her Dark-Green-Status. At first, she is even too anxious to meet at the nearest Mall – fearing a downgrade. But after Amy and Carol promised to not bring their bands and journals, Carol did without telling Amy to only protect herself and avoid problems with the G4’s. That shows her selfish and hypocrite acting when it comes to dangers that could affect her power. For example when Brian sees them sitting at the table, Carol raises her arm “with a kind of glee” (p. 63, l.20) to show her band. However, it is obvious that Carol still feels ashamed when she betrays her friends, e.g. (p.64. ll.5f). All in all, Carol indeed misuses her power, but she isn’t really against any kind of revolution. J. The chapter 7 of the novel “The War Between The Classes” published by Gloria D. Miklowitz 1985 in the United States is about Amy and Carol interfering with the G4 in the Mall. Moreover about Amy’s visit at her brother Hideo and his girlfriend Sue and her plans to fight against the color game. After Amy plans a shopping trip in the Mall with Carol, she tries to encourage light greens and oranges to resist to the color game. But this does not work out very well because her blue equivalents do not really support her. They are enjoying the power and simply shrug this existing injustice off. Without really convincing somebody, Amy moves on to visit Hideo and Sue to diner. Amy wants to know if the color ever mattered in their relationship and how their father affected Hideo’s love life. Later when Carol and Amy meet, they plan to not bring their bands and journals but Carol decides lastly to still bring her color game “equipment”. Whilst talking about protest against the color game, Brian interrupts them and Carol shows her band avoid a punishment, but Amy almost insists on getting punished. By showing very obviously her blank arm she provokes Brian and gets noted on his list.
Englisch Analyse - Was ist dramatic dialogue
"2. Explain how the scriptwriter uses stage directions and dramatic dialogue to paint a portrait of the Queen." Kann mir mal jemand erklären was genau dramatic dialogue sein soll? Stage directions sind klar aber was soll dramatic dialogue sein?
Englisch - Satzfehler?
Hallo, ich muss meine Englischklausur korrigieren und habe eine Frage zu folgendem Satz: "The author calls attention to his amazement for America and to the fact how special his home country is (...)" Ich habe einen expression Fehler angestrichen bekommen bei "to the fact how". Ich weiß jetzt aber nicht genau was da falsch ist bzw. wie ich ihn korrigieren soll. Darf ich kein "how" nach "he calls attention to the fact" benutzen oder soll ich da noch ein "to him" hinter anhängen oder wie ist das? Danke im Vorraus (:
Comment ( Englisch )
Und zwar schreibe ich nächste Woche eine englisch Klausur , wo wir einen comment verfassen müssen. Könnte bitte jemand meinen comment korrigieren und schreiben was ich falsch gemacht habe. Danke. "Comment on the problem between parents and teenagers and how to solve them." Nowadays their are big problems between parents and teenagers but how schould we solve them ? I think it's normal that sometimes parents and teenagers just have big conflicts about a theme. Both sides have often seperate opinions and it's hard to come on one conclusion . You can solve problems if you sit together and discuss about it, in my opinion it's the best solution you can do. But its also important that teenagers should listen to their parents what they want to say, what is a big problem. All in all I would say that teenagers and parents should talk clearly about the problem , so they will come to conclusion.
Summary schreiben TENSES
Ich hab schon verstanden, dass grundsätzlich in present tense geschrieben wird, aber der Zeitungsartikel, zu dem wir die Summary schreiben sollen, ist simple past, present perfect progressive etc. Jetzt weiß ich nicht, ob ich den Inhalt des Artikels im Past oder Present Tenne wiedergeben soll Ihr könnt ja mal einen Blick drauf werfen und mir sagen, wie ihr das angehen würdet. LG und danke :D Meine Summary: Summary of “The Case of Trayvon Martin“ The news paper article “The Case of Trayvon Martin“ written by Charles M. Blow published by “The New York Times” on March 16th 2012, presents the sequence of the murder of Trayvon Martin who was shot by George Zimmerman. The action took place in Sanford, Florida in the evening of 22nd February 2012. At first, the author narrates that Trayvon and his father were coming home from the local supermarket. George Zimmerman, who is the neighborhood watch captain, gets curious about the boy. Next, Charles M. Blow states that Zimmerman decides to call the police, that tells him to stay inside the car. But he chases Trayvon anyway and after a verbal confrontation they start to fight. The police found the dead body of Trayvon Martin laying on the ground after hearing a gunshot from Zimmerman’s handgun. However, George Zimmerman had been later on released with the justification that he was acting in self defense (according to the “Stand your Ground Law”). Furthermore, there is no evidence that could proof something else. Trayvon’s funeral took place on March 3.
Ich bitte darum folgenden Text zu berichtigen
Bus Boycott in Alabama All has happened in a bus on 05 December, 1955.An African-American old women, Rosa Parks refused to give up her seat for a younger white man. She got arrested. What was the bus boycott? A big group of human who refuse, take part in something to show their disapproval is called a boycott. And the Bus Boycott was a non-violent protest from the African Americans, who didn't take the bus for 381 days. The bus system lost a lot of money, because so many African Americans rode the bus. The B.B. was ledged by Martin Luther King junior. When did it begin? It began December 05, 1955 and ended December 20, 1956 How did it begin? Rosa Parks, an African American Women, was asked to get up her bus seat for a white man, who was younger and could have take the place next to her. She didn't want to get up and tryed to protest against that, but she was stopped by police and gained arrested. What did the boycott tryed to reach? They wanted to let the law about racial segregations in bus end. On December 13, 1956 they finally won. The U.S Supreme judgement lifted the law about the racial segregation in bus. Also the boycott was perceived as a big victory in the history of the racism. (Hier ist ein Bild zu sehen, auf dem ein Polizist Fingerabdrücke von Rosa P. nimmt.) Rosa Parks, while a policeman took her fingerprints. She was treated like a hard criminal, but she's called a hero now. Vielen Dank :) Es ist meine Hausaufgabe für das Fach Englisch 8. Klasse Gymnasium.
Wie wird es richtig ins englische übersetzt?
Ich möchte schreiben: Wie viel muss er bei der Ratenzahlung mehr bezahlen? Meine Übersetzung: How much he has to pay more with the instalment? Klingt aber sehr falsch, weiß es jemand besser? Danke im Voraus.
Korrekturleser für Englisch-Hausaufgabe gesucht!
Hallo, ich muss morgen einen Comment abgeben und würde mich freuen, wenn jemand mal rüberschauen und Verbesserungsvorschläge machen könnte. Danke schonmal im Vorraus :) Comment books and candies
Everybody loves chocolate and crisps. Especially kids like to enjoy all kind of candies. Not only we know this, so do the companies. Nowadays they are allowed to sponsor schools by donating buyers of school books with coupons for chocolate and crisps. But is it really a good idea to let them do that? In my following comment I will discuss this question. On the one hand it has its benefits if schools are sponsored by manufacturer of sweets. It maybe animates more parents to buy school books because they know that they will also get some vouchers and people really love to get things cheaper or for free. Besides we live in a period where chocolate, crisps and other kinds of candy is in well demand. In conclusion school as well as customers and companies profit from it. Another point is that chocolate, that’s what psychologists claim, makes people happier. At the beginning of the 19 century chocolate was also sold in pharmacy. A potential follow-up of eating more chocolate would be that students fortunate when they are in school. So the lessons would be more peaceful and for this reason kids improve their grades. On the other hand we cannot ignore the fact that the cons of chocolate and crisps overbalance the pros. Candies are bad for health. Medics say that they cause addictive behavior, overweight and damage our teeth dramatically. Moreover a disadvantage is that the consumption of sweets has nothing to do with education. The companies don’t want to help the schools by sponsoring them. Actually they want to help themselves making more profit. They bring people to buy unhealthy stuff to earn as much money as possible. With this kind of advertising people are manipulated. The factories know which kind of people is their best target group: Kids. In shops they pester their parents until they give in and buy the things their kids want to have. Often these are candies. With vouchers of chocolate and crisps more parents are likely to buy them. In conclusion it’s a good thing to sponsor schools but I think there are better ways than with coupons for sweets. In the long term it damages the health of kids if they tend to reach for chocolate or crisps too often. To prevent this it must be forbidden for the companies of sweets to offer vouchers in return of books.
Kurzgeschichte analysieren englisch?
Ich hab eine Analyse zu einer Kurzgeschichte geschrieben und wir schreiben nach den Ferien die englisch klasur und ich weiß jtz nicht ob die Analyse gut ist, es wär lieb wenn sie jemand mal die Analyse durchlesen würde und seine Meinung dazu äußern würde und mir Tipps geben könnte. Danke im Voraus ! Die Kurzgeschichte ist folgende: Laura bye Robert O'Neil Everybody in the crowded restaurant stared when the young woman suddenly threw a glass of wine in the face of the older man sitting opposite her at a table near the window. The young woman was attractive and well dressed. The man was at least twenty years older than she was. He looked shocked. The young woman suddenly stood up and ran towards the door. 5 ”Laura, come back, please,” the older man shouted. But she had already reached the door. The man ran after her. It had started to rain outside. She ran out into the middle of the street. ”For God's sake, give me a chance to explain,” the man shouted. She turned around and stared at him. A car had just turned the corner and was coming towards her very fast. The driver had not turned his windscreen wipers on, and he was talking to someone on his 10 mobile. Then - suddenly - he saw her -directly in front of him, so close that he could see her eyes when she turned her head and looked at him. Die Aufgabung Stellung ist folgende : 1a) examine the First sentence of the Story. How does it get the reader's attention right away? 1b) at what Point of the Story do you Sense that something Bad might happen? What words or actions help to build up suspense as the Story develops? C) explain the effect of giving the car driver's perspective in the Last sentence. Why do you think the author chose to end the story like this? Meine Analyse: I analyse the Short Story Laura, written bei Robert O'Neil. It is about two persons who are in a relationship. They are sitting in a restaurant. And the girlfriend ist very angry about her boyfriend. The story is written in written in the third-Person omniscient narrator. The first sentence of the story get the reader's attention,because it begins that a women threw a glass of wine in the face of a older man, but it is not written why, then the reader wants to read the full part of the story, because he want to know what had happened. I sense at l.10 that something bad might happened:"for God's sake, give me a chance to explain". From my opinion there is a tension in ll.5-6 where Laura runs towards the door and in ll.12-13 where the car comes. I think the Author gives the car driver's perspective in the last sentence , because he wants to build up suspense. In my point of view this has a very big effect to the reader, because i was really exited at this part.
Hilfe beim Englisch "Comment" (Grammatik und Vokabular)?
Hallo liebe Community, ich habe zu morgen eine extrem wichtige Hausaufgabe auf und habe die schon fertig geschrieben, wäre aber gut wenn da nochmal jemand rüberschaut, der Ahnung davon hat. :/ Briefly before most of us finish school, there comes up the question which company will be the perfect one for an apprenticeship. Should it rather be a small and familiar enterprise or a big and international one? And what are the advantages and disadvantages of both? One of the biggest advantages in a smaller company is that you´ll have a better overview about all the departments and what the company does. That means that each employee has an overview about what his colleagues do. This allows him to solve problems faster because everyone knows everyone and so you immediately whom you have to contact. Another fact for working for a smaller company is that you´ll have a better chance to get noticed by people in company who matter. In principle, the boss has a better bond to his staff and may react differently on each employee. That means, for example, that the boss appreciates the work of the individual more as in a big international company and maybe therefore the employees will earn more money. But there is also a personal benefit for employees in a small company. Because a company where everyone knows everyone hasn´t only a benefit for operating procedures, it also has even a benefit for social life. Because in small enterprises there are more company trips which should make the teamwork stronger and there are also some familiar christmas parties and so on. But there are also disadvantages to work for a small company. These disadvantages are mostly advantages for working in big and international enterprise. An example for this is that you´ll have lots of special benefits in international companies. For example you´ll have the opportunity to connect your working life with your private life. Many big companies have their own fitness studios, kindergartens, lounges, were you can chill out, and so on. The most small companies can´t offer things like these because they haven the possibilities or money for it. Another aspect is that you´ll become a member of a large community and you´ll work with colleagues, partners and customers worldwide. For many young employees this is a great chance to interact with different cultures and personalities. Maybe you will even have the chance to see many places on earth because you have to travel because of your job. This is also something which the most small companies can´t offer. Finally I came to the conclusion that both of them have their advantages and disadvantages, therefore bigger isn´t always better. But a big company often has benefits which a small company will never have. One example for that is, that bigger enterprises offer mostly higher salaries. At least there is to say that everybody has to decide by his or her own what is more important for oneself and their apprenticeship.
Ist diese englische Argumentation gut? Was kann ich besser machen? BITTE SCHNELL ANTWORTEN!
Hallo, ich schreibe morgen eine Klassenarbeit, in der ich eine Argumentation auf Englisch schreiben muss. Wahrscheinlich darüber, ob Schüler freien Internetzugang haben sollen. Könnt ihr mir sagen, ob dieser Text gut ist und was ich besser machen kann? Danke :) Internet access More and more students have a free internet access at home. A study tells the people that every fifth student is more than four hours a day on the internet. Is it OK that students have a free internet access on their computer? The most parents think that it‘s OK because their children can work with it, they look for example after vocabulary or they can visit web sites like Wikipedia because it‘s easier than look it up in a dictionary. Another argument for this thesis is that students can contact their friends on Facebook, ICQ or other chat portals. Teachers also can upload some school stuff like exercises or tests on school portals like Lo-Net. Another significant point is that students can educate themselves by reading in various forums and articles. It is important to mention that not all is well on the internet. The first argument against this thesis is that it‘s dangerous to give away personal data or make something public. If a student has a job interview, his/her employer can find out personal data, for example embarrassing pictures from the last party, on platforms like Facebook or Myspace. A teenager also can be interested for pedophiles. They chat with them and want to meet them. They often want to know their address because they want to stalk them. Another argument against it is that there are some web sites that aren‘t allowed for people. Many web sites on the internet are illegal and there isn‘t an advice. On these web sites people can watch the movies that are normally at the cinemas now or they can download music for free. In these downloaded folders is a computer virus and a virus can break down your computer. Another significant point against a free internet access for teenagers is that they can depend on it. Every fifth student is more than four hours a day on the internet. Finally, it can be said that every parents have to decide themselves whether they allow their children to have free internet access. I think that the internet is very useful for school or or chatting with friends, but you have to pay attention what you make public and on which web sites you are.
Technisches English - Hilfe ... wer kann mir helfen?!
Mein Englisch ist leider sehr sehr schlecht, kann mir vielleicht jemand die Fehler aufzeigen oder sagen was ich verbessern kann. Ist eine Hausaufgabe in Techn. Englisch. Hier der von mir schlecht übersetze Text; ============================================================ Discription of gearbox Speedy Sleeve method Introduction: Operating in the current the seal gets hot. Because it´s out of oil and drives dry. The result is , that´s the seal rubs on the shaft. This is the reason why the seal gets too hot and grinds the shaft. The shaft runs in the bearings at the front and the back. Standard approach: Must to dismount the whole gearbox case to remove the shaft. After this step we must carried the shaft to a company how can regrinde, refill with metal and faceing the shaft to the dimensions unit, of the technical drawing. The new solution: To protect the shaft, we must install a metal sleeve on the shaft, to prevent the shaft for grooves. The metal sleeve has a very strong surface. That’s why the shaft is resistant against grooves. We must to install a new self lubricating seal. When the metal sleeve is worn , you can change it very easy and fast. Conclusions: For a fast repair: We recommend the new soulution, this soulution is esay to mount and particulary less expensive. The downtime is very short, under one week. For a long life repair: We recommend the standard approach because the counterface is stronger and more resistant for grind, but this approach has a long downtime to follow. ============================================================= Vielen Dank.
Kann jemand den Text kontrollieren und evtl verbessern? :)
Good day ladies and gentlemen, Politics is a big topic today, but what do young people think about the government in their country? I would like to provide insights today and represent the German youth. When we ask young people if they are interested in the topic of politics, we often get similar answers. The once it doesn’t matter what happens. Often they know nothing about the government and nobody does anything about it. This group knows that there is a government, but they think they are to young for that and not dealing with it. The others are interested in it, but they don’t know whether and how they can get involved. Here we are at the point. There are too few apportunities that involve young people in the process of government. Of course, various projects are taking place, but they are unobtrusive and not up tot he demans of youth. But we must to say, there are approaches. Always again, we talk to young people who deal with the issue and have changing ideas. They speak of stronger penalties for murderers, rapists and so on. So they want to do more to judice in Germany. But they also appreciate their life in Europe, to study your options and to travel anywhere. To be free, safely and live as they want. I want to say, there are some young people who would like to integrate and really interested in politics. This promotion of young people is close to my heard because they are the adults of tomorrow and also the voters in Germany. Thank you for your attention.
hilfe bei meinem englisch vortrag...
Ich habe morgen einen englisch vortrag und bin sehr sehr... schlecht:D! könntet ihr mir das hier einmal durchlesen und verbesserungsvorschläge geben und das ganze ein bisschen helfen auszuschmücken? ebenfalls dankbar wäre ich wenn ihr mir noch ein paar tipps habt was ich noch einbauen könnte (denn der Vortrag sollte etwas länger sein.): hello everybody. My name is e. r. and i'm 16 years old. i was born on the 10 april in 1995. My hobbies are boxing and fitness. And on weekends i love to go out with my friends. I grew up in Z. and moved a year ago to S. currently we live in a small house near the train station My brother is 16 years old and and visited at the moment the 10. class and my sister is 12 years old and visited the 6. class. My mother work by "c.s" since one year and my father work as computer scientist. I work at the SAG since 3 years. and now i make an apprenticeship as a businessman. at the moment I'm working on the human resource department in the main building in W. the team where I work consists only of young peoples. We are responsible for the hotline, accept applications and evaluate them, and we create many documents In the future i want to work in my own gym. i would be have a big house and a fast car... and my wife is jessica alba. thanks for your attention ich bin dankbar für jede kritik und jede hilfe:)... und ja ich weiss mein englisch ist verschissen;)!