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For sure England should maybe have behaved towards the Islamist differently,to give them the same chances as for example to the Indians,however,this would be maybe also no guarantee on no terrorism.Anyway the terrorism came not from somewhere,but developed in the course of the time by frustration,rage,hate and disappointment. This justifies not the terrorism,but shows only how did it generally happen and that the guilt don`t lie only on one side.Because by the attempt of England to receive a kind of the British Empire,one has not noticed what problems and conflicts one releases,which appear today in form of violence.
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For sure maybe England should have behaved differently towards the Islamists, to give them the same chances as the Indians for example, however, this would maybe also be no guarantee to stop terrorism. Anyway terrorism didn’t come from anywhere, but developed in the course of time through frustration, rage, hate and disappointment. This doesn`t justify terrorism, but only shows how it generally happens that the guilt doesn’t lie on one side only. Because by the attempt of England to receive a kind of the British Empire, one hasn’t noticed what problems and conflicts one releases, which appear today in form of violence. Was du mit dem letzten Satz sagen wolltest weiß ich nicht, aber sonst habe ich es verbessert.Sollte eigentlich jetzt so stimmen schließlich bin ich Engländerin =) .lg, lucy7
vielen Dank!!Das hat mir wirklich weiter geholfen.
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