Frage von Leguan123x, 52

Bitte um Korrektur (Englisch)!?

Hallo liebe gutefrage.net Community, ich bin mir bewusst, dass das hier ein etwas längerer Text ist, wäre euch jedoch sehr dankbar, wenn mir einer diesen korrigieren könnte.

Ferrero Today we want to present you a product of the company ferrero. Ferrero is one of the largest confectionery manufacturer in the world. They are creating many products that are you probably already known. For example: Kinder Schokolade, Mon Cheri, Hanuta and Giotto But today we will present you the product Nutella.

Main ingredients The main ingredients of nutella are cocoa, sugar, palm oil, milk, hazel nuts. Their selection is based on strict criteria. The main factors are: excellence in quality and full respect for human rights and sustainability. For the compliance with the criteria, there is also a code. The Ferrero Code of Business Conduct. In this code, you can find all the basic requirements.

  1. Cocoa The first main ingredient is the cocoa bean. Cocoa, which is used for Nutella, comes from various regions of the world. but mainly it comes from the Ivory Coast (which means Elfenbeinküste), Ghana, Nigeria and Ecuador. Ferrero wants to buy up to 2020 cocoa from 100 percent sustainable production. To achieve this goal, they already cooperate with fairtrade and the Rainforest Alliance. They are particularly committed. But I think that you all should know these two organizations.

  2. Sugar The next important ingredient is sugar. The sugar, which is used for the nutella, comes to 100 percent from Germany. According to the Ferrero Code of Business Conduct they use only sugar without genetic engineering

  3. Palm Oil The next ingredient is palm oil. One of the most important vegetable oils worldwide. The Palm Oil comes from Malaysia and Brazil. Ferrero attaches great importance to the traceability of this raw material. Since 2005 the company is an active member of RSPO. The ,,Roundtable of Sustainable Palm Oil". The RSPO was founded in 2004 to promote the production and use of sustainable palm oil. And since the end of 2013 Nutella is produced from 100% sustainably certified RSPO palm oil worldwide.

  4. Milk The milk is 100% percent from traditional dairy regions in Germany. For the production of Nutella they use milk powder. To get the milk poweder you have to eliminate the water of the milk.

  5. Hazel nuts The hazelnuts which are processed for the Nutella, come mainly from Turkey and Italy. A special attention of the quality will be cast on Turkey. Ferrero wants to buy up to 2020 hazel nuts from 100 percent sustainable production like the cocoa. The Supplier Their products are sourced from carefully selected suppliers, which of course can guarantee freshness consistent quality, consistent taste characteristics and foot safety. They pay attention to short and controlled supply chains, in order to create an efficient traceability system. To this end, Ferrero maintain for about 40 years long-term supplier relationships

Antwort
von Ringoscarlett, 20

Ferrero.

 Today we want to present to you a product of the company Ferrero. Ferrero is one of the largest confectionery manufacturers in the world. They are creating many products that you probably already know. For example: Kinder Schokolade, Mon Cheri, Hanuta, and Giotto. But today we will present to you the product Nutella.

Main ingredients: The main ingredients of nutella are cocoa, sugar, palm oil, milk, and hazel nuts. Their selection is based on strict criteria. The main factors are: excellence in quality and full respect for human rights and sustainability. For the compliance with the criteria, there is also a code. The Ferrero Code of Business Conduct. In this code, you can find all the basic requirements.
Cocoa: The first main ingredient is the cocoa bean. Cocoa, which is used for Nutella, comes from various regions of the world. But mainly it comes from the Ivory Coast (which means Elfenbeinküste), Ghana, Nigeria and Ecuador. Ferrero wants to buy up to 2020 cocoa from one hundred percent sustainable production (?). To achieve this goal, they already cooperate with fairtrade and the Rainforest Alliance. They are particularly committed. But I think that you all should know these two organizations.

Sugar: The next important ingredient is sugar. Sugar, which is used for the Nutella, is produced in Germany. According to the Ferrero Code of Business Conduct they use only sugar without genetic engineering.

Palm Oil: The next ingredient is palm oil, which is one of the most important vegetable oils worldwide. The palm oil used in Nutella comes from Malaysia and Brazil. Ferrero attaches great importance to the traceability of this raw material. Since 2005, the company is an active member of the RSPO. The "Roundtable of Sustainable Palm Oil". The RSPO was founded in 2004 to promote the production and use of sustainable palm oil. And since the end of 2013 Nutella is produced from one hundred percent sustainably certified RSPO palm oil worldwide.

Milk: The milk used for Nutella comes from dairy regions in Germany. For the production of Nutella they use milk powder. To get the milk powder you have to eliminate the water of the milk.

Hazelnuts: The hazelnuts, which are processed for Nutella, come mainly from Turkey and Italy. A special attention of the quality will be cast on Turkey. Ferrero wants to buy up to 2020 (?) hazelnuts from one hundred percent sustainable production like the cocoa. 

The Supplier: Their products are sourced from carefully selected suppliers, which of course can guarantee freshness, consistent quality, consistent taste characteristics, and food safety. Ferrero pays attention to short and controlled supply chains, in order to create an efficient traceability system. To this end, Ferrero maintains long-term supplier relationships that have lasted for forty years.

Expertenantwort
von AstridDerPu, Community-Experte für Englisch, 18


Ferrero

Today we want to (besser: would like to) present (Hier fehlt etwas.) you a product of (Präposition) the company ferrero (RS). Ferrero is one of the largest confectionery manufacturer (Grammatik) in the world. They are creating (Grammatik) many products that are you probably already known (Grammatik). For example: Kinder Schokolade, Mon Cheri, Hanuta and Giotto (Punkt) But today we will present you the product Nutella.

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von Puxler, 16

Schon mal nachgedachte den Text bei GoogleÜbersetzter ein zu geben?

Kommentar von Ananasss1 ,

Google Übersetzer ist nicht für solche Texte geschaffen.

Kommentar von Oubyi ,

Guter Witz!

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