Wir schreiben am Freitag eine Klassenarbeit, wir haben als Übungsaufgabe ein Thema vorgegben. Vielleicht könnt ihr mir eure Meinung mittteilen, oder eventl. Fehler verbessern.
Pros and Cons of moving to another country
First of all, I think moving to another country include many pros and cons. At first i want to show you the chances of moving to another country:
Most Probably your speaking skills will beacame better because speaking the whole day in another language improve also your pronunication. But that is not the only reason for moving to another country. You can learn something about the culture and their way of life. In some cases the foreigners get influenced by the traditions of their new country, so they can not imagine of moving back to germany. Another significant point is the meeting of new people. You can find new friends with new personalities and skills. Perhaps you get influenced of them and join a football club, for example.
But moving to another country can also have a bad side:
t first you will get problems in establishing in class. Furthermore its difficult to speak the whole day in the foreign language. You can not speak to somebody in your mother tongue except to your family.
In summing up can be said that moving to another country included many pros and cons.
Its important to mention that a decision like this have to take very carefully.
THANK YOU FOR READING ;)
Schön, dass dir meine Antwort gefallen hat. Hoffentlich hilft's !
Danke für das Sternchen!
:-) AstridDerPu
Danke für die Korrektur. Trotzdem bin ich ein bisschen verwirrt. Da gerade die Satzanfänge wie z.b. in summing up, but this is not the only reason for this,..) vorgeschlagen würde als Satzverbindungen. Ist das was du verbessert hast falsch oder hat sich es nur nicht so gut angehört. Da ich im ersten Momen ein bisschen verblüfft war wieviele Fehler mein Aufsatz beinhaltet
Also, das mit dem s vergessen, geht klar ;) das schau ich mir nochmal an ;)